Thanks for doing this for me. It came out pretty well.

The Good
I like your use of shading in the pic. It adds depth and makes it seem more realistic. I also think you did a pretty nice job of showing her sitting down as well. The lamp prop is a nice addition to the idea and makes it seem like she's in an actual house instead of just floating in a white space.

The Not so Good
The pupils in her eyes seem a bit smaller than they really should be, as are the highlights. Take a close look at the eyes in this pic: ( [link] ). Do you see how the highlight partially covers up the pupil? You should try and do eyes more like that. Tanya's thighs are also supposed to be a bit thicker than how you portrayed them. They seem a bit too thin. Finally, the right shoulder looks a bit off, almost like it's disjointed. If it was moved a bit closer to the book, I think it would look better.

The Unique
When I created the outfit in the latest pic of her, I didn't imagine it as a red and black ensemble like you have here, but it doesn't look too bad on her. The design of the chair is also interesting. I don't think I've seen a recliner quite like that before.

Overall, you did a good job.

Thanks.

You may be right about the right shoulder. It looks a bit off. o.o
And I probably didn't think too well over the highlights, but I will try to think over it next time.
Hmm... didn't know that I made her thighs too thin, thanks for pointing that out.

About her outfit, so was that I remembered couloring her shirt in her profile pic red. So I kind of used that as a colour base.

But I'm really gratefull for your critism, it was helpful and didn't sound bad. Thank you! ^^

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No problem. As for her outfit, it was meant to be different then the colored reference that did. I imagined it as a lot of pastels. Like her shirt would be a light blue like this ( [link] ), her vest and shoes would be a lavender color like this ( [link] ) and her pants would be a dark turquoise color like this( [link] ). Hey, do you think you can recolor the pic using the colors I just mentioned? If you can, that would be greatly appreciated.

I don't know. It seems like you liked it anyway.
But sure, maybe I will.

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That's cool. By all means, let me know if you make any changes.

Ok.

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Kamen Rider is my house god and if you complain you will get a Rider Kick on your head!

Nice!

Thanks. ^^

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Very cute.

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